jiejingfm 发表于 2023-4-7 15:15   全显示 1楼
这一篇节奏有点慢，总体看起来还是很棒。不过个人感觉作者想把男主眼中女性的各种奇怪表现和欲神的调教一一对应，反而导致了很多奇奇怪怪的小问题，比如女友大腿被欲神写字，正常不应该是女友在下课后会去卫生间处理，然后男主发现女主裤子湿了或者别的情况。太刻意去一一对应导致的漏洞反而让人感觉不合理和强行给男主降智


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